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 Post subject: Re: Best Opening Verse
PostPosted: Thu Feb 14, 2019 11:10 am 
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 Post subject: Re: Best Opening Verse
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Of schoolgirl fantasy
She wants him so badly
Knows what she wants to be
Inside her there's no room
This girl's an open page
Book marking she's so close now
This girl is half his age


My avatar approves of these lyrics, not me personally though...

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 Post subject: Re: Best Opening Verse
PostPosted: Thu Feb 14, 2019 11:41 am 
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I'm definitely kicking everybody's ass so far in this thread, do better lads.

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312player wrote:
I'm definitely kicking everybody's ass so far in this thread, do better lads.
You posted "good" and "bad" in reply, and then the spoken word lyrics to a gimmicky rap song. Fuck, you're worthless. smfh.

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 Post subject: Re: Best Opening Verse
PostPosted: Thu Feb 14, 2019 3:22 pm 
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She tried to take me upstairs for a ride
She had to heave me right across shoulder
'Cause I just can't seem to drink you off my mind


For the cowbell, if not the lyrics.


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 Post subject: Re: Best Opening Verse
PostPosted: Thu Feb 14, 2019 8:23 pm 
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Frank Coztansa wrote:
312player wrote:
I'm definitely kicking everybody's ass so far in this thread, do better lads.
You posted "good" and "bad" in reply, and then the spoken word lyrics to a gimmicky rap song. Fuck, you're worthless. smfh.



Hey dipshit.. the first one was a bad joke.. I'm three for three since then. What do you have offer up?

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 Post subject: Re: Best Opening Verse
PostPosted: Thu Feb 14, 2019 9:44 pm 
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'Cause the flag still stands for freedom
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 Post subject: Re: Best Opening Verse
PostPosted: Thu Feb 14, 2019 9:46 pm 
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312player wrote:
Frank Coztansa wrote:
312player wrote:
I'm definitely kicking everybody's ass so far in this thread, do better lads.
You posted "good" and "bad" in reply, and then the spoken word lyrics to a gimmicky rap song. Fuck, you're worthless. smfh.



Hey dipshit.. the first one was a bad joke.. I'm three for three since then. What do you have offer up?

Only one way to properly solve this.

You each get to write one four line opening diss verse each other. Board can decide who wins that way.

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 Post subject: Re: Best Opening Verse
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Obviously this window licker didn't see my 3 previous posts, I run this thread.. there is no dispute. I didn't think this needed to be stated by the OP( seemed obvious) but I'll say it. The song has to be good or better. 90% of the horseshit in this thread is from dogshit songs.

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 Post subject: Re: Best Opening Verse
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312player wrote:
Obviously this window licker didn't see my 3 previous posts, I run this thread.. there is no dispute. I didn't think this needed to be stated by the OP( seemed obvious) but I'll say it. The song has to be good or better. 90% of the horseshit in this thread is from dogshit songs.

I agree with you but the OP is still the best opening verse in this thread. I have yet to see one that tops it.


Now about those diss verses..

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 Post subject: Re: Best Opening Verse
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FavreFan wrote:
312player wrote:
Obviously this window licker didn't see my 3 previous posts, I run this thread.. there is no dispute. I didn't think this needed to be stated by the OP( seemed obvious) but I'll say it. The song has to be good or better. 90% of the horseshit in this thread is from dogshit songs.

I agree with you but the OP is still the best opening verse in this thread. I have yet to see one that tops it.


Now about those diss verses..


I'm not searching around the net for some limp dick, light bulb salesman, half a burrito Sox fan , Hershey kiss cookin turd. I won with sounds of silence.. I don't give a fuck what you busters say.. I killed it in this thread.

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 Post subject: Re: Best Opening Verse
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Fuck you, 312
Your baseball thoughts are full of pooh
And even if you write some cool lyric
You'll never win, so suck my dick

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 Post subject: Re: Best Opening Verse
PostPosted: Thu Feb 14, 2019 10:19 pm 
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312player wrote:
FavreFan wrote:
312player wrote:
Obviously this window licker didn't see my 3 previous posts, I run this thread.. there is no dispute. I didn't think this needed to be stated by the OP( seemed obvious) but I'll say it. The song has to be good or better. 90% of the horseshit in this thread is from dogshit songs.

I agree with you but the OP is still the best opening verse in this thread. I have yet to see one that tops it.


Now about those diss verses..


I'm not searching around the net for some limp dick, light bulb salesman, half a burrito Sox fan , Hershey kiss cookin turd. I won with sounds of silence.. I don't give a fuck what you busters say.. I killed it in this thread.

Frank has laid down the gauntlet.

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 Post subject: Re: Best Opening Verse
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Nigga please, I got Frank on his knees
He's an ignorant, hard working , stubborn pollack from oaklawn..but on this site he's an ignorant pawn . He knows no better in his oak lawn Spartan sweater. SMH

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 Post subject: Re: Best Opening Verse
PostPosted: Thu Feb 14, 2019 10:32 pm 
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To be living here today
'Cause the flag still stands for freedom
And they can't take that away



Holy shit that's terrible

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 Post subject: Re: Best Opening Verse
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 Post subject: Re: Best Opening Verse
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Opening verse:

They're selling postcards of the hanging
They're painting the passports brown
The beauty parlor is filled with sailors
The circus is in town


Opening line:

Really don't mind if you sit this one out.


Right now I can’t read too good
Don’t send me no more letters, no
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 Post subject: Re: Best Opening Verse
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I am an anti-Christ
I am an anarchist
Don't know what I want
But I know how to get it
I want to destroy passerby


Good choice, but the biggest difference between reading the lyrics to a Sex Pistols song and listening to them, are all the grunts and asides that aren't picked up in the recitation of the lyrics.


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Young teacher the subject
Of schoolgirl fantasy
She wants him so badly
Knows what she wants to be
Inside her there's no room
This girl's an open page
Book marking she's so close now
This girl is half his age

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Shimmy shimmy ya, shimmy yam, shimmy yay,
Gimme the mic so I can take it away.
Off on a natural charge, bon voyage
Yeah, from the home of the Dodgers, Brooklyn squad
Wu-Tang Killer Bees on a swarm!
Rain on ya college ass, disco dorm!
For you to even touch my skill,
You gotta have the one Killer Bee and he ain't gonna kill. Now
My producer slam, my flow is like bam!
Chop that down, pass it all around!
Lyrics get hard, quick cement to the ground!
For any MC in any 52 states,
I gets psycho killer Norman Bates!
My producer slam, sharp like bam!
Jump on stage, and then I dun-daaaah!


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I got laid off down at the lumber yard,
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Honorable Mention:

Standing in line marking time
Waiting for the welfare dime
'Cause they can't buy a job
The man in the silk suit hurries by
As he catches the poor ladies' eyes
Just for fun he says, "Get a job"

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One more:

You walked into the party
Like you were walking on a yacht
Your hat strategically dipped below one eye
Your scarf, it was apricot
You had one eye on the mirror
And watched yourself gavotte
And all the girls dreamed that they'd be your partner
They'd be your partner

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The sun is shining so I head for the park,
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Boy, you're lookin' cute
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Go downtown and stand in line
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Saw you suck off that old man
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It kinda falls off some by the end of the verse but holy shit this is how you start off a rap song!

Biggie Smalls is the wickedest
Niggaz call me pussy?
I dare you to stick your dick in this!
If I was pussy I'd be filled with syphillis
Herpes, gonorrhea, chlamydia, gettin rid of ya
Got it locked like the penitentiary
Niggaz mention me for M.C. execution, who you choosin?
The wack MC? Or the black fat MC?
Jack Dempsey would start shakin
All it's takin, is some marijuana and I'm makin
MC's break fast like flapjacks and bacon
Backspins to windmill, who's still the gin drinker
Ill thinker - explodin when the paper hits the ink, uhh
Take your gangsta chronicles, turn to page 666
Holocaust, Big the merciless
Niggaz press they luck-and they get a buttfuck-in
Straight up the ass, raw dog with the rash
and I don't fuck wit the condoms
The condoms is a problem from the AIDS gettin sprayed
Diseases, Big pleases, MC's across the seas
is just the way I clutch my prey, hey
I'm crazy and deranged
Blowin niggaz out the frame, simple and plain
But gettin back, to the black, rhinocerous of rap
Big took a loss, how preposterous is that nigga?

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